雅思作文高分观点:时尚是否对社会有利

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雅思写作高分观点:宠物是否有益于人
  Are pets good for mankind?
  Arguments
  1. Pets are of particular importance to children in this Plastic Age when most of us live in large cities.
  2. Watching the everyday activities of a pet helps a child to understand nature and cope with problems.
  3. Learning to care for a pet helps a child to grow up into a loving adult who feels responsible towards those dependent on him.
  4. The great virtue of pets is that they can keep us company.
  5. A pet is kept as a companion that makes us feel happy. It's suggested that pets should be sent to astronauts in a spacecraft to help reduce their loneliness.
  6. Besides providing mere companionship, pets invite us to love and be loved.
  7. Often a cat or a dog can comfort us at times when human words don't help.
  8. Animals can communicate with each other in their particular way. They communicate with human beings, too, for they are quick to sense anger and sorrow.
  9. People keep pets for emotional rather than economic reasons.
  10. A pet dog brings its master (owner) a sense of confidence, for he cell see in the dog that faithfulness does exist and he does have something to trust.
  Counter-arguments
  1. Keeping pets is just a waste of time and resources.
  2. The growing number of pets has caused serious hygiene problems that cannot be solved.
  3. The earth will no longer be a world of human beings and animals but a world of aninkals only if we don't take measures to stop the increase of pets.
  4. Pet dogs and cats of both *es should be sterilized because the animals themselves are in danger of becoming the first victims for the simple reason that their owners don't have enough time for too many of them.
  5. Pets are humanized by those who keep pets. Owing to their need for a home, for food and drink, pets are tamed and idealized by their owners.
  6. People nowadays are so crazy about pets that they even neglect caring for their own children.
  7. A campaign should be launched against the overpopulation of pets.
  8. As a matter of fact those who keep pets don't always treat their pets with kindness. They sometimes abandon their pets when they go away on holiday- and are unable to take the pets along with them.
  9. It's really against nature to cage birds, chain dogs and keep cats within the house.
  10. Pets are animals. They should be seen in their natural habitat rather than in the homes of human beings.雅思写作头脑风暴:广告对社会有利还是有害? - 南大现代雅思的日志,人人网,南大现代雅思的公共主页
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雅思写作头脑风暴:广告对社会有利还是有害?
雅思写作头脑风暴:广告对社会有利还是有害?
The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
有人认为禁止各种形式的广告对社会有利,因为广告完全没用,甚至对社会有害。你是否同意,或部分同意这种观点?
这道题目是让我们说说广告的好处和坏处。
1. 你愿意看广告吗?你觉得广告对你影响大吗?
用户回答参考:
●大多数时候我不愿意看广告,因为现在的广告太多,而且有时候一条广告来来回回播,让人腻烦。我觉得广告对我的影响非常大,如果去买一个商品,不知道买什么的时候,就想想哪家广告做得好,请的明星大牌。
●yes,I like to watch ads,I think it influence me a lot
2. 广告的好处是什么?
用户回答参考:
●first,let us know about the product better.Secondly,promote the sales for the enterprices.what's more,develop the economy.
●广告可以介绍产品,而且让我们了解产品的性能等信息。而且一个厂家能够花大价钱请大明星、在黄金时段做广告,间接说明它的实力雄厚,相对地,它的产品也比较有保证。广告业也是一个从业人员众多的行业,为社会解决了众多的劳动力的就业问题。
3. 广告的坏处是什么?
用户回答参考:
●to begin with,some didn't reflect the true quality of goods and we are cheated by the producers.Furthermore,we are influenced by it and buy some things that we actually don't need.In the end,
●许多虚假广告欺骗了消费者,使消费者身心受到了损害,甚至影响他们的健康。一些广告旨在宣传买了他们的产品就是买了幸福,一些人冲动之下买了许多他原本不需要的东西。
●夸大了产品的作用,误导了消费者,也会给消费者带来攀比的心态,造成不良社会风气;广告的费用会提高产品的价格,最终的支付者还是客户。
4. 有什么办法可以减少广告的不利影响?
用户回答参考:
●First...
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雅思作文素材:时尚是否对社会有利
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Arguments1. A good appearance may help people make a better impression in social contacts.2. When people are getting old, they should pay more attention to their appearance.3. The way people are dressed helps them to preserve a sense of their own value and personality.4. Fashion adds spice to life with its rich colour, variety, and beauty.5. Men and women follow fashions in order to please each other and themselves.6. The world will be a dull place to live in if people always wear clothes of the same style and colour.7. Mass production makes well-designed clothes cheap, available to everyone.8. The fashion industry is an enormous one. It provides employment for people like textile workers, designers, shopkeepers, etc.9. The fashion industry has helped industrial research in the sense that a lot of new materials, like nylon, rayon, etc. have been made to meet the demand of the consumers.10. Being well-dressed is of psychological importance because confidence in one‘s appearance leads to confidence in one‘s success in life.Counter-arguments1. People sometimes look odd with the so-called fashionable hair styles, make-up, and dresses.2. Top designers in Paris and London are dictatorial, for they lay down the law and the whole world rushes to obey.3. Fashion goes like this: one year, the next year, the reverse.4. People are so vain that they are afraid of being seen in old-fashioned clothes.5. People, especially the fashion-followers, are blackmailed by fashion-designers and stores.6. Changing fashions is a deliberate creation of waste because one will have to discard a lot of new clothes in order to follow fashions.7. Fashion designers are not interested in important things like warmth, comfort, and durability of the clothes. They are only interested in outward appearance and profits.8. The odder the clothes, the more expensive they are, and the more fashionable they become. It‘s a great pity that people have lost their appreciation of real beauty.9. In order to follow fashions, people have to put up with great discomfort, such as suffering from cold in winter.10. One‘s confidence does not grow from the way one is dressed, but from the inner qualities one possesses.&1&&&
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  今日大家带来雅思写作高分如何轻松取的内容介绍。雅思大作文可谓是部分的重头戏,雅思考生必须对此部分的写作方式和步骤了如指掌,这样才能写出满意的雅思作文。
  现在社会中的年轻人总是会发出“理想很丰满,现实很骨感”这样的感叹,用此来表达对现实生活的无奈。而在紧张的雅思写作考试中,雅思考生们又何尝不会经历这种无奈呢?写作7分是许多考生梦寐以求的分数,但即使是一些外籍教师所撰写的范文,在考官笔下也不过是7-8分!对于国内大多数雅思考生而言,7分这样的雅思作文高分似乎是可望而不可及的。那么,究竟怎样的文章,才能得到考官的青睐,最终幸运的得到7分的分数呢?
  一.Task response
  1. 具体要求
  Task response表示任务的完成。在官方给出的评分标准中,7分有这样的要求:
  1. Address all parts of the task,
  2. Present a clear position throughout the response,
  3. Present, extend and support main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalize and/or supporting ideas may lack focus。
  ① 回答了题目要求的所有问题。②整篇文章观点鲜明。③详细的解释和论证了观点。
  2. 范例评析
  ▲ 剑桥雅思全真试题7 Test2 Task2
  Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding the punishment。
  Discuss both views and give your own opinion。
  1. 考生需要对题目中的两个相反的观点进行分析,不能只分析自己倾向的观点。即:固定不变的定罪制度有何作用;依据犯罪动机和环境灵活的定罪制度有何作用。
  2. 考生需要非常清楚的表明自己的观点,即回答应当如何对罪犯的犯罪行为定罪。
  3. 考生对于题目中两个相反观点的分析需要摆出充足的论据,提出自己的理由并通过例子来证明。
  7.5分考生范文选段:对固定不变的定罪制度的分析
  On the one hand, fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society. ‖Individuals knowing that they will be subject to a certain punishment if they are convicted with a given crime will reconsider committing this act in the first place. ‖This deterring effect also leads to social stability and security, through minimizing the number of crimes committed. ‖If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of, penal decisions would be largely arbitrary. This would result into criminals getting away with their crimes and into a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts。
  1. 观点:固定的惩罚制度对社会有威慑力。(fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society。)
  2. 理由:考虑犯罪成本(reconsider committing crimes in the first place)
  3. 扩展结果:有利于社会稳定(lead to social stability and security through minimizing the number of crimes committed。)
  4. 理由:如果没有固定的定罪制度,会使犯罪分子更猖狂。(If people knew they would be able to convince the court or the jury of reason for having committed the crime they are accused of , penal decisions would be largely arbitrary。)
  5. 扩展结果:犯罪分子逍遥法外,不利于司法公正。(criminals getting away with their crimes and a high level of injustice caused by the subjective approach of different courts。)
  3. 对策
  ① 复习真题,找生词
  在考题中,经常出现核心词汇的重复,比如:distance learning, criminal等。建议考生们可以在复习写作时,先把近两年的写作题目过一遍,查查生词。这样做可以大大降低考生在作文题中遭遇生词的尴尬,提高审题的准确性。
  ②掌握不同题型大作文的写作重点
  观点类:可以支持、反对、中立,一定要表达自己的观点。论据要充分,举例不可或缺。
  分析解决类:所问即所答,重点分析原因,解决方法多角度。
  ③八大话题,重点突破
  在考题中,“教育,科技,环保,全球化,政府,媒体,工作,社会生活”为常考的八大话题。复习重点有以下几方面:1. 每个话题的核心词汇要烂熟于心。2. 每个话题要积累至少两个可以作举例论证的实例。3. 每个话题至少选择两道题目做brainstorming思路拓展练习。4. 每个话题要至少积累两篇范文。5. 每个考生对自己不熟悉的话题,要加强以上练习。
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